Miles Away

It Kills me so clearly

And I love you so dearly

Let's cross the distance and be happy

You and Me; perfect fit

I know together We can make life so sweet

But it Really Hurts that Kiss i can't taste

That Warm touch and embrace

this aching pain

longing and love so burning

bring down this distance

come to me and we will dance

miles away we're so apart

Let's cross the distance

and let's make that love we have.

Author's Note

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[Glen Yumang Manese]

You weave a dance here... with the words...at first the rhyme scheme is present and then you just go for internal rhyme...throughout the rest of this passage...I believe you could add a bit more in this and the end...giving more in the verse...