All I Want

All I Want

A Poem by Gypsy

 

All I Want

 

If for just a day
You could be mine
Entwined with you
Is where I would be

 

Carry you to heaven
Kiss your mouth
Be lost in you
Lost in Us

 

If for just a day
I could feel your breath
Taste your honey
And caress your skin

 

All I want is you


Like a fresh morning rain
To lay spellbound

Eternally Bewitched

In your immortal embrace

 

To know that again
If just for a day

 

©By Gypsy
February 15, 2002

(Revised 7-13-14)

 

© 2014 Gypsy


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To know that again
If just for a day
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If just for a day
To know that again
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Did you want to end with the theme of your verse...I noticed that the usage was put in the beginning of each line --- and in the end you reverse that order...deems a different read in that part --- as for this sigh of inspiration reads quite lovely...is a good word for it...flows right down the page for the reader...in all its splendor...

Posted 10 Years Ago


Very well written with an indepth message. A much needed theme for the present ages. Great work Gypsy. A wonderfully candid & romantic write. :)

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Gypsy
Gypsy

Rancho Santa Margarita, CA



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