The Sweetest Threat

Sounding so innocent, so pure, but withholding the biggest threat he'd ever told me.

"Go on", he said, "of course you can."
I took a step out the door.
"Always remember -"
I turned around. He smiled sweetly, giving me a piercing glance.

"I trust you."

Author's Note

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Reviews

[William Liston]

I like how this piece feels incomplete; it helps to add a somewhat mysterious vibe. I've always loved cliff-hanger endings, and I think you did that well in this poem. I think your description also adds to this piece because it gives the poem an underlying feeling of sadness and/or fear. Well done.

-William Liston

[Velvet Angel]

Thank you very much, I'm glad it comes across just like it should!
Thanks for reviewing.

[AmandaFuller]

Wow. Just like all your other writing, this is amazing. I love the description where you said it was a threat. Great job, as always!

[Velvet Angel]

Thank you! I gonestly can't tell you enough how much it means to me that you are always reviewing my pieces!
Yes, I created this yesterday morning, I was like, what sounds sweet and innocent but can be turned around to be seen as a threat? I feel like you can read these three words in two different ways which I for one, find to be really cool.

[AmandaFuller]

You're so very welcome! And yes exactly!