Things I Never Did

Things I Never Did

A Poem by Velvet Angel
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There are a lot of things I never did. Lots of things I should've done. Lots of things you did to me.

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I never went to the cinema with you
or mentioned i knew you hated being seen with me
Never went on a road trip
or let you know i knew you didn't like journeys
Never went out to dinner
or remarked i knew all your favourite foods
Never got to know your friends
or said i knew you felt ashamed of me
Never went to a concert with you
or told you i knew you took her instead
Never asked how your day was
or told you i knew where you'd been
Never asked why you didn't buy me presents
or revealed i knew you got some for her
Never told you how much i loved you
and never hurt you as much as you hurt me

© 2016 Velvet Angel


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Velvet Angel
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This really breaks my heart. You write beautifully. You will go far.

Posted 8 Years Ago


Velvet Angel

8 Years Ago

Thank you so much!
It's made me think. There are too many things we never ask or do. Well done!


Posted 8 Years Ago


Velvet Angel

8 Years Ago

Thank you! Yeah that's true, I think about that a lot and I regret many missed opportunities...
I absolutely love all of your writing. I wonder how much of it is your real experience or not; that's how great it is!! You are truly a wonderful and magnificent writer. I hope you continue to be successful with all you plan to do. Every time I see that you posted a new story or poem, that is one of the first things I do. I automatically go and read it! Your writings are always great! They remind me of some of my experiences as well. Keep up the good work! I can't wait to read your next writing.

Posted 8 Years Ago


Velvet Angel

8 Years Ago

Oh my god really! Thank you so so much, I really enjoy writing and stuff like this just keeps me goi.. read more

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Added on June 15, 2016
Last Updated on June 15, 2016
Tags: poetry, poems, comfort, hurt, romance, sad, relationship, breakup

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Velvet Angel
Velvet Angel

Germany



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Young and ambitious writer. I try, and just every now and then, something happens to create itself inside my mind and it needs to be written down. I hope you have fun/generally enjoy reading my st.. more..

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