wrong brain

wrong brain

A Poem by Ase
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a girl told me i don't feel right and i thought about it and that's ok

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you say i don't see it
the way that you mean it
but i'll just keep looking
if feelings are fine
and if i can't know it
the way that you show it
maybe that's a good thing
maybe it's my mind
i'm here to endure it
and you can make sure it
gets harder and harder
don't worry i'm fine
i'll walk in back of it
even though i love it
i'll pick up the garbage
that's if you don't mind

© 2019 Ase


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maybe it's better not to know after a ll..

Posted 5 Years Ago


'i'm here to endure it ~ and you can make sure it ~ gets harder and harder ~ don't worry i'm fine '

It's finding that place where you feel comfortable, at home.. able to be who you think you are until evicted. Perhaps. There's a distinct music, meter or whatever to this poem.. makes a repeat easy to complete, to smile at, and, more!

Posted 5 Years Ago


Very beautiful poem. I enjoyed it.

Posted 5 Years Ago


ahahahaha i just have to shake me nog and walk away ;} there are mysteries that will never be disclosed ... ever......................... and if its right ...that's a deep beauty of it :)
E.

Posted 5 Years Ago


well,do we ever know,maybe we`re not supposed to

Posted 5 Years Ago



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Added on November 14, 2019
Last Updated on November 14, 2019
Tags: poem, girls, mental, stupid, women, death

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Ase
Ase

Stavanger, Norway



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when you look me in the eye just remember that im waiting for you to stop doing that please more..

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