Seven

and then the ties were broken
and all of the bonds impaired
in the beginning hour
of the year, i disappear

Reviews

[Kaylor Mason]

Intriguing, stylish and quick . . . something about this poem that cuts clean through. Nice :)

[Revery]

I love complex simplicity. Strong write.

[fireblossom]

Nice work. I like it.

[katyj]

This is really good!
I enjoyed this one
awesome job.