Goodbye

Goodbye

A Chapter by jillibeanx

One of the last things that I wanted to say was goodbye, goodbye to everyone and every thing. Most people want to stay with their families and want to be with them forever, for me it was a different situation, because not only did I have to leave my family but I was forced to.Firstly, I will introduce my self since this is a diary and i guess that is what you are suppose to do,I am Harley Monrose, I am 13 years old and I am the last ghost in this world.I know your probably thinking that I am lying because how could a ghost write and where did all the other ghosts go but i am telling the truth, I am the only one that knows what happened on that day, the day when they all went missing and I am writing this diary (in hope that someone finds it) to tell someone what happened.
 My mother always said to me "Don't worry about the world cause I will always be there to protect you", I miss my mother she was always so positive and caring even though she was put through tough times she always smiled and made the world seen like a better, happier place.   


© 2012 jillibeanx


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It's good although it's not very... this may seem harsh but not interesting, you need to make something happen, use better words, and go into more detail about things.
Well done though.

Posted 12 Years Ago


good.... u forgot the rest lolx

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