Kisser's Paradise Lost

Follow up to a past poem about a past lover. I am needing to leave the past behind. Goodbye lover.

 

Kisser’s Paradise Lost

 

Her kiss was not just a kiss

She declared it so

Declaration on Beach Road in Surfers Paradise, Queensland

So warm

So slow

So right

Paradise is perfect

 

“One More”

Her softness caressing mine

Her lips repeated those words again and again

 

Her kiss touched another’s lips behind a wall of confusion

She disappeared into lies

Declaration on Ann Street in Brisbane, Queensland

So cold

So fast

So wrong

Paradise is ruined

Reviews

[TheGhostInside]

I like poems that get you thinking like "hmmm what happened?" Great work keep up.