The Alcoholic

The Alcoholic

A Story by Vincent
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About Bob White!!!

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The Alcoholic

By Vincent Chapman Sr.

 

 

     Polk County was known for its friendly residents, good ole' country cooking, and local taverns. Like every small town, Polk, over the last twenty years, had been bombarded with large companies. Even though the warehouses were just extensions of the main buildings in the city, they employed hundreds of residents. More than a third worked at the Budweiser Plant.
     Bob White, the town drunk, was a hardworking man. Bar fights and domestic disputes with his wife of twenty years, are amongst some of the things he did while intoxicated. The alcohol had taken a toll on him. Even if he didn't drink for a day or two, you could still smell the alcohol emerge from his pores. Bob was an embarrassment to some.
     "You're going to kill yourself Bob," His wife cried as she watched him down a pint of grain liquor.
     "I'm…I'm not…drunk," he slurred, staggering towards the sofa.
     "You need help."
     Bob ignored her. That's one thing that she hated.
     "Where's the remote?"
     "See, you don't even care about me or yourself. All you worry about is drinking and watching television."
     "Shut up woman. I'm a grown…..."
     She cut him off, "A grown man that doesn't care about his well-being."
     "I do."
     "No you don't. If you loved me, you wouldn't do what you do."
     "Do what," he asked as if he forgot what she said.
     She was disgusted. Being in a relationship with a man like this would eventually make her go insane
     "Bob," she sighed, "alcohol is going to be the cause of your death."

 

     After six months of in-patient rehabilatation programs and counseling, Bob had finally stopped drinking. His relationship with his wife had taken a turn for the best and on top of that, he finally made supervisor of the Steel company he worked for. The community was stunned when they saw Bob enter the doors of the church. Some members thought they had seen a ghost, because at one point and time, Bob didn't attend. He hated it.


     "What time will you be home," his wife asked.
     "Around five."
     "Anything particular you want for supper."
     "You know my favorite."
     "Bean soup it is."
     The banging of steel and the humming of large machinery had echoed throughout the plant.
     "Honey, I'll talk to you when I get home," Bob said,"I can hardly hear you."
     She smiled to herself. Betty hadn't been this happy in months.
     "Okay"
    There was a slight pause.
     "I love you."
     "I love you too," she responded before she hung up the phone.

 

     It was six o'clock and Bob hadn't showed up yet. Dinner was getting cold. Even though she wanted to think positive, she feared the worst. A relapse. Being late without calling was a routine that he pulled months ago when he would be at the bar.
     Seven o'clock. Seven-fifteen. Seven-thirty. There was a knock at the door. When she opened the door the police was standing there. Her heart skipped a beat.
     "Mrs. White?"
     "Yes," she responded, looking at the officers puzzled.
     "There's been an accident," he said taking off his hat.
     She looked at them, lips slightly parted.
     "Your husband, Bob White, was killed in a traffic accident."
     "Oh no," she cried.
     "Sorry Mrs. White."
     "Was alcohol involved?"
     "Yes."
     She burst out in tears.
     The officer continued, " A truck from the Budweiser plant had ran a red light, striking Mr. White on the drivers side. He was killed instantly."
     Betty knew that someday alcohol would be the cause of his death.

© 2008 Vincent


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Well, there's some irony for you! The way you wrote this reminded me of a story a parent my tell their child as a life lesson or something. Thanks for sharing!

Posted 16 Years Ago


3 of 3 people found this review constructive.

This story is very deep...... I think about my struggles with drugs and alcohol and I always wondered if death would be my rock-bottom. It's ironic because this man in the story reached his rock bottom and quit and alcohol still killed him by use of the Bud truck. I really liked this. I am still pondering about it.....

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Nice twist! You've got dialog that's fairly easy to follow, except for the phone conversation. You kind of jumped from the church right to Bob speaking with his wife, never even mentioning that he had a phone. You might want to expand on the transition there. Otherwise, a good rapid-fire read. I look forward to more of your work.


Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Wow... wonderful story... love the ending... so karmatic. LOL Thank you for inviting me to be your friend and drawing my attention to you and your work. I will enjoy reading more. You have a wonderful style. Many cheers.

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Vincent, I love the twist at the end. Because of my life experience I did suspect he was dead and not drunk but I didn't expect the beer truck.
I know now when I read your work to look for a clever twist at the end. Nice.


Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

This I am sure will hit home for many. You have a great gift here and love the twist at the end. Thanks for a great read.

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

very striking......
friend of bw are you....

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Wow! Impressive writing. Nice little twist at the end. Not so much a twist, I suppose, because I had a feeling... It's sad, but doesn't it always seem to work out that way? You decide to quit smoking to better your life, 6 months later you're diagnosed with a tumor. You quit drinking, down the road you get killed by a beer truck. Don't mean to make light of it. My mother is an alcoholic. Humor keeps me sane.

Well written, and welcome to the Cafe!

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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