Hypnagogic
A Poem by
vincentbals
Am I right? Have I lost
the armour,
of the shiny
knight?
© 2011 vincentbals
Reviews
I know how you feel. Never give up!
Posted 13 Years Ago
Sometime I ask the same question. I lost my rabbit foot and four leaf clover. Sometime hard to feel lucky and strong. A excellent poem.
Coyote
Posted 13 Years Ago
Sometime I ask the same question. I lost my rabbit foot and four leaf clover. Sometime hard to feel lucky and strong. A excellent poem.
Coyote
Once again, you have expressed deep thought and emotion in such a short poem, at the same time staying true to your writing style.
Posted 13 Years Ago
Once again, you have expressed deep thought and emotion in such a short poem, at the same time staying true to your writing style.
i liked it a lot. some of the best pieces have only a few words. you did a good job. :)
Posted 13 Years Ago
i liked it a lot. some of the best pieces have only a few words. you did a good job. :)
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Added on May 9, 2011
Last Updated on May 9, 2011
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vincentbals Antwerp, Belgium
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I grab every opportunity, life is my sincerity, and my sincerity is bliss.
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