A poem for my girlfriend

A snowflake of desire

The movement of my eyes,
when you pass by.

The stimulation of my nose,
when your fragrance fills the air.

The softening of my lips,
when imagination comes alive.

A snowflake of desire
slowly sliding down my face.

The look in your eyes,
when you swing your hair.

The sun on your nose,
reflecting like a diamond.  

The beauty of your lips,
covered with gloss.

A snowflake of desire
slowly sliding down my face
not able to reach the end.

A fire heats me up.

You.

Reviews

[Myrcei]

This is so lovely:) I love it. Lucky girl:)

[Allison]

I like this! It shows your passion for her without going into details. Good job bro!

[Amanda Naomi]

:) hehe i like this alot! wish my husband would write me something like this!!!!

[Coyote Poetry]

Amazing words and emotion in this poem. I like how you expressed your appreciate and love. This is a outstanding poem. Thank you.
Coyote

[HappyTaylor]

This is very cute. I love it. Lucky girl. :)