The power to dream.

Again an old poem I found on my previous blog.

Deep blue water
submerges thousand grains of sand.
Granular water
smoothly changes direction,
back and forth,
Curled tiny waves
overwhelming bare feet.
Observed by colorful pears and shells,
inspired by the feet’s ability
to pace
back and forth.
They let themselves go
with the power of the sea.

Just to feel like them.

Reviews

[qaralynn]

love the imagery!!!! nice!

[The Raven King]

This had a Haiku feel to it. Short yet full of meaning. It also had a very peaceful zenlike feel to it. I think in the eighth line you might have meant pearls instead of pear

[Angie Diane♥&hea..]

I like the imagery as well. It is really nice. Thanks for sharing. :)

[Miss Coral]

Wonderful piece... love the gentle imagery- you made the rhythm ebb and flow, just like the waves themselves, which added so much to this piece.
Excellent write.

-Coral-

[FireWoman]

Lovely, the ebb and flow of words matched perfectly with the theme

[Moonflower]

This is a very strong piece. It has soft, intricate imagery and I loved the ending line. Good work, dear.

[Vicky Zhuang Yi-Yin]

good one! I really liked it, the flow worked really well... all in all, good job! keep writing!
-Yin

[luciddreamer]

I too get pulled by the sound of the ocean......great job

[Senseless whatever]

Nice write. Peaceful

[Candylove.]

i loooooooooove this. :)