Hand

Something I wrote a couple of months ago.

A reaching hand.
Bringing soft air of confidence along,
almost
touching the other.
Emphasizing the feeling
floating on faith,
reducing the distance in between.

Willing to bond their
past
future
present.

Reviews

[Cynthia]

That's soooo nice! Handing a hand to others, that's true!

[hannah]

You've arranged your words differently, I have to admit. And it complimented the poem. As observed, your poems are quite short. At times, the length of the poem helps bring out the emotion within it. This could have been expanded, lengthened but it was the way you arranged your words that didn't necessitate a longer poem.

[the in between]

This is so beautiful and true. Everyone can use help even though some dont want it.:)

[Crusaderscross]

Really good style. The mood is well rendered and the imagery perfect. Loved this one...my style

[loowzerX]

sometimes i wonder whether my work inspires you :P
i love your style, so short and beautiful!