Hand

Something I wrote a couple of months ago.

A reaching hand.
Bringing soft air of confidence along,
almost
touching the other.
Emphasizing the feeling
floating on faith,
reducing the distance in between.

Willing to bond their
past
future
present.

Reviews

[qaralynn]

I love this! great write

[Angie Diane♥&hea..]

This is really good. I really like this a lot. Thanks for sharing. :)

[Senseless whatever]

beautiful write

[Atheana Kylee-S. C.]

Awesum :)

[I Am Svetlana]

Joining hands means that we have strength and when we reach for another person's hand, then we are ready to make a change and do whatever we can to bring that change...without backing down. With powerful strength, we can then rule and dominate.

[Coyote Poetry]

The power of the hand is under-rated. To walk hand in hand with your love is the best days of a life. Sitting with wife when old and gray holding hands. Being young holding hands for the first time. Your poem told a true tale. True love walk together and the hand are together forever. A outstanding poem.
Coyote

[Caitlynxoxo]

This was incredible. So beautiful and so true!

[KL]

I reeaaaally like this, it's so basic but says so much. Especially those last three lines, and the way you formatted them. Symbolic of the past present future being bonded already. I'm sure many are still reaching out, let's lend 'em a hand, shall we? Hahah. Nice man.

[Sports Girl]

Beautiful poem

[Moonflower]

Beautiful, inspirational, and well said.