There is love
A Poem by vincentbals
I LOVE YOU
LONELINESS
OCCURS,
VANISHES
EVERYTIME
YOU ARE
ON MY MIND
UTOPIA
© 2010 vincentbals
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this is cool :)
Posted 14 Years Ago
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sweet and short i like the utopia at the end thats something new. And the vertical and horizonal lines are very clever and creative. thanks for sharing:]
Posted 14 Years Ago
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This is so sweet!! I love the format too. It REALLY made it more interesting to read, not that it needed help. :) It was to the point and beautiful! :D Great job!
Posted 14 Years Ago
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sometimes, a specific poetic structure makes you compromise your thoughts in order to be faithful to it...that is why I prefer free verse...but your thoughts are pure and succinct...and absolutely true...
very nice
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I like this one. Great job :)
Posted 14 Years Ago
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creative~ affecting poetic~!
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Very creative, i enjoyed this
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creative, I like it. summed it up very shortly what love is to you
Posted 14 Years Ago
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In 13 words you create a outstanding poem. I like the strength in this short poem. A excellent poem. Thank you.
Coyote
Posted 14 Years Ago
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Added on August 12, 2010
Last Updated on August 12, 2010
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vincentbalsAntwerp, Belgium
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I grab every opportunity, life is my sincerity, and my sincerity is bliss.
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