There is love

I LOVE YOU
LONELINESS
OCCURS,
VANISHES
EVERYTIME
YOU ARE
ON MY MIND
UTOPIA

Reviews

[loowzerX]

this is cool :)

[the in between]

sweet and short i like the utopia at the end thats something new. And the vertical and horizonal lines are very clever and creative. thanks for sharing:]

[HappyTaylor]

This is so sweet!! I love the format too. It REALLY made it more interesting to read, not that it needed help. :) It was to the point and beautiful! :D Great job!

[dovetailer]

sometimes, a specific poetic structure makes you compromise your thoughts in order to be faithful to it...that is why I prefer free verse...but your thoughts are pure and succinct...and absolutely true...
very nice

[Needy]

I like this one. Great job :)

[NoneOfYourBusiness akaK..]

creative~ affecting poetic~!

[deeps]

Very creative, i enjoyed this

[DamienHino]

creative, I like it. summed it up very shortly what love is to you

[Coyote Poetry]

In 13 words you create a outstanding poem. I like the strength in this short poem. A excellent poem. Thank you.
Coyote