There is love

I LOVE YOU
LONELINESS
OCCURS,
VANISHES
EVERYTIME
YOU ARE
ON MY MIND
UTOPIA

Reviews

[Aven]

I really like the format here, it makes it so much more powerful. :)

[Martina]

Love it, but I agree with "Poetry Girl" that Utopia does not fit in with it. It seems like a random word you threw in to make it work. I get that it is a "Utopia" because you are in love, but it just doesn't fit the overall theme.
Great job.

[Poetry Girl]

the Utopia part doesnt really make much sence to me (but im not the smartest person around so its probably just me haha) this poem doesnt say much (there arent very many words) but yet again, it says so much (it has great meaning). i really liked this. fantastic

[FlawedByDesign]

A really nice and heartwarming acrostic.
While short, it stays true to the point
and shines the light on the feeling behind
the write.

Well done.

[Crusaderscross]

The ending was very strong even though it is quite detached from the rest. But still a nice write.

[KL]

THIS is great! I love how the last word sums it all up even though it's unrelated to the 'sentence' structure of the poem. Good s**t vincent!

[Mai Aliza]

Er, not what i expected, but still cute.

[Angie Diane♥&hea..]

Awe this is adorable. :)
Haha I remember doing this too...
Hehe, but my sucked...I think it was on Romeo. Anyways good job thanks for sharing. :)

[mmzx]

sweet.
(:

[Adelia Alighieri]

I remember doing this with names at school lol. I love it. :D