Feelings

Dusty roads,
Sand, forming a hurricane
Imaginative reflecting my thoughts
Not knowing where to go, where to end
The only thing I know, is that I will raise higher
Floating on soft  clouds filled with strong feelings
Heaven, just like I’m with you.

Reviews

[Akshat♥]

your writing is nice..i like your choice of words..tc:)

[Poetry Girl]

after reading this poem i had a picture in my head and i dont know if it was the same picture in yours but still a very good and well desriced picture from what little words you said. great poem

[Crusaderscross]

Very well written poem. Your choice of words is spot on, just enough to paint the picture. Very good job

[mmzx]

i like your choice of words.

[Adelia Alighieri]

It creates an exciting picture. Well done.

[dovetailer]

curious that the way to get out of many unpleasant situations is to "rise above it..."
it you have someone who makes you feel like you're in heaven...you are blessed...
lovely thoughts well expressed..

[Needy]

:)

[CherryBomb]

Wonderful feeling and expression!

[deeps]

Floating on soft clouds filled with strong feelings
Heaven, just like I’m with you.

Love these lines here, this is wonderful

[Coyote Poetry]

Yes when the control of emotion is lost. It is like a hurricane. I like this short poem. A powerful and soft poem at the same time. A very good ending to this outstanding poem.
Coyote