A frozen moment

A frozen moment

A Poem by vincentbals

Our passionate and evolving love is like;

A frozen moment in a frozen world, filled with shining icicles;

White strawberries rising from magical, fertile landscapes;

Developing themselves into delicious, lovable and complete organic beings;

Representing the warm and strong feeling you give me, indescribable ;

You’re as beautiful as the sun,  rising far away in an unknown world ;

however you enlighten me with your golden glow.

© 2010 vincentbals


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lush~ electric~ picturesqe adoration sung with sensate sweetness~

Posted 14 Years Ago


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this is strong and well composed..they strawberry metaphor is wonderful..you have packed a powerful punch in a short piece..lovely

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Antwerp, Belgium



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