A frozen moment

Our passionate and evolving love is like;

A frozen moment in a frozen world, filled with shining icicles;

White strawberries rising from magical, fertile landscapes;

Developing themselves into delicious, lovable and complete organic beings;

Representing the warm and strong feeling you give me, indescribable ;

You’re as beautiful as the sun,  rising far away in an unknown world ;

however you enlighten me with your golden glow.

Reviews

[hannah]

Impressive description which makes the scenes in your poem stand out. Not rhyming but that isn't always necessary anyway. Once again, it's straightforward. A good read.

[Coyote Poetry]

So beautiful. Words that need to be read often. The poem written with great skill expressing love and thankfulness. A excellent poem.
Coyote

[Sweets]

Great poem :)
I love it!

[loowzerX]

the poem creates a sort of vignette. wonderful :) well done

[Cynthia]

That's a great poem! It bring out
a beautiful picture, love it.

[Crusaderscross]

I find your poem quite simple but in a good way. You pick simple subjects and create great Imagery. Very well done job. I would like to see this poem evolve after this first love become 2 years old...:). Very well done bravo

[HappyTaylor]

I'm left speechless by the beauty of this beautiful piece.

[Needy]

This is great :))

[Jason Galliger]

this clearly describes the blossoming of new love where their was nothing but tundra before. well done.

[dovetailer]

these are beautiful images of a new and consuming love...the challenge will be to never lose this innocent appreciation of it's miracle as loves come and go...cross your path for a time then go their way...
Beautiful sentiments