You

You’re my inspiration, my everything.

My heart beats faster, whilst  I’m breathing your presence in my life;

It’s you,  imaginary floating in front of me with an enchanting aura;

Foreseeing bad things heading towards me, pointing me with a subtle indication;

To go in the right direction, imploring me with blank eyes,

Pretending you never knew it, however always had hoped it.

Reviews

[Cynthia]

This is sooooooooooo sweet! I love the first two lines, it's sooo sweet!

[loowzerX]

awhh this is sweet :)

[KatiePie]

This made me smile when I was done reading it, because I can automatically tell it's so heartfelt, and that makes it all the more beautiful, it puts soul and love into your words. Gorgeous write and an enjoyable read, thank you for sharing!
-Cathrine

[hannah]

Very inspiring and heartfelt. You obviously dedicated this to someone special and I think if that person had the chance to read your poem, he or she would have been grateful. It's not a traditional rhyming poem, much less lyrical, but it's straightforward and is unabashedly emotional. Well done.

Breaking hearts. Breaking hearts.

[ForTheWorld]

i love the first two line...amazing!!!

[mmzx]

'You’re my inspiration, my everything.

My heart beats faster, whilst I’m breathing your presence in my life;'

this is the best poem yet.
(:

[Moonflower]

This is very heartfelt and touching ^_^ i like it.

[CherryBomb]

Perfect name to desribe this lovely poem!

[Crowley]

We all drink from this well spring form time to time and it seems to be good for writing....nice job.