You

You’re my inspiration, my everything.

My heart beats faster, whilst  I’m breathing your presence in my life;

It’s you,  imaginary floating in front of me with an enchanting aura;

Foreseeing bad things heading towards me, pointing me with a subtle indication;

To go in the right direction, imploring me with blank eyes,

Pretending you never knew it, however always had hoped it.

Reviews

[Angie Diane♥&hea..]

This is a good write. I like it. Thanks for sharing. :)

[Senseless whatever]

great write. Smooth and vivid. I full appreciate this.

[Coyote Poetry]

Yes some woman can make us stop in our step. I like this poem. We can be led into heaven or hell with a sweet look of love or disgust. A very good story and some hope in the ending. A excellent poem.
Coyote

[the in between]

:O filled with so much love and appriciation.. very sweet :)

[Needy]

I really like this

[Crusaderscross]

Like your style a lot. You can render you messages in small packages. Really liked this poem, full of emotion and thought. Really good job.

[Sweets]

Sweeeet =)
I love it :D

[dovetailer]

We rarely act just because our knee jerks...we are inspired by another we admire...you are inspired to write beautiful things...we all hope you keep heeding your muse

[~ Czarina Iris ~]

Beautifully written, beautifully expressed, everything about this poem is absolutely stunning.

[amnashah]

wow :)