Imagination

Your bare feet heavenly touching soft grass
walking towards people I don’t want them to go.
Hope vanishes, desperation appears in a great extent
Forcing your feet to point your toes in my direction.

One step closer

Your legs slowed down by my silent scream for love
softly getting at ease, ready to take off.
Once your feet are facing me they depart
Strengthening my soul, by your approach.

Two steps closer

My eyes sparkle on the rhythm of your hips dancing
every step you take, the wilder my imagination.
Guided by an unknown will to embrace your personality,
I neglect those thoughts of your naked body.

Three steps closer

You breathe heavier the closer you come to me
your tummy produces a soft air whilst going up and down.
I notice it, I feel it, I want it to wave my brown hair.
Butterflies in my tummy, living from the oxygen you give them.

Four steps closer

Your arms moving on the beat of your steps,
Making my heartbeat go faster, the closer you get.
I want them to hold me, to form the shape of a heart,

representing us.

Reviews

[Alicia Schroeder]

This is beautifully written. Great peice

[Angie Diane♥&hea..]

I like this a lot. The emotion was very nicely presented within the poem. This was very well done. Thanks for sharing. :)

[Poetry Girl]

this is... im not sure how to describe it but its really good and i liked it alot! nice job!

[Senseless whatever]

good write. vivid with traces of emotion dancing throughout. You may want to add some commas, just for flow purpose.

[KL]

I can completely relate to this right now, and really don't have anything else to say other than that you pinpointed a feeling very directly, expertly, and poetically. Fantastic.

[Caitlynxoxo]

Oh Wow. I can picture what you are saying perfectly! This is so amazing and so descriptive, yet poetic...!! Perfect verses cellestial with each other, and the words were enough to make me blush :) great job

[Atheana Kylee-S. C.]

I can actually picture the things you described happening. Nice. :)

[dovetailer]

I can see that happening...the electricity...the dread becoming hope becoming elation when everything becomes better than you dreamed...

[hannah]

A touching poem. It's fascinating how straightforward you are with your topics. A well-written poem, phrased gracefully.

[Adelia Alighieri]

I can picture it very well. Thanks to your brilliant words.