Alphabet

Await

Beautiful moments

Coming along your way

Defeating bad things across.

Eventually settling down and

forgetting about the lost, feeling

good vibes and controlled emotions.

Healing everything that once filled life black.

Innocent souls suffering from the lack of appreciation.

Joy and happiness softly start to reach your empty veins.

Keen on living, finding their way through a maze of lost thoughts.

Life they seek, and find in the deepest of your soul, eager to come out.

Masks of pure hope hiding in the ceiling of your body, softly leaving their cage.

Not a chance to fail, nor a chance to stay, every single one stimulating the other one.

.

Once they are out, your lips turn slightly softer, the smile on your face brighter.

Pursuing the dreams you’ve always had, but never dared to make real.

Questioning your choices, relying on the purest form of

reality inside your body, the heart which makes us

see things we don’t want to, but have to in order

to accept what we need and want in life.

Utopia keeping in mind, however

vivid thoughts in your mind

Will wait for the right

Xanthic sun.

You will

zone in.

Author's Note

Note: english isn't my mother tongue

Reviews

[KL]

Your English is flawless here, not to mention the poem couldn't have been written in any other way! You've really outdone yourself here... and I really like the feeling of positivity this gives you the entire way through. Anything good can come out of the bad, anything can be made into art. You ARE talking about poets and poetry itself, aren't you? You're talking about 'zoning in' to something that inspires you and writing about it with 'controlled emotion.' Not necessarily your intention, but it makes sense with the theme of the Alphabet and its letters, as well as 'relying on the purest form of reality inside your body.' Thanks for sharing!

[Needy]

:)

[Cynthia]

That's pretty cool!

[Crusaderscross]

This is what I find to be poetry. Poetry is a choice of letters and giving them meaning. This is what happens here. A very simple yet introspective poem. Very well done.

[nono]

I like it...really explains what letters should mean..lol..it's very nice and a really cool idea.

[Candylove.]

brilliant!

[CherryBomb]

Greatt!
Really Creative!

[amnashah]

English is not even my first language so I really cannot say anything about that, however the poem runs smooth even though its idea depends on bringing the alphabets in a certain order. Its so smooth that it seems it happens effortlessly.

[The Raven King]

I had a poetry class with a woman from Cambodia. Her English was not the best, but her poetry was awesome and refreshing. It seems that when you don't know all the rules and how to's of a language, your poetry becomes free to explore lesser known territory and you do things that most would not attempt. I think we get so caught up in the proper form and the right way we forget we are writing poetry. Which in the end is the language of the heart and not the tongue. Good job

[PadfootBlack]

HOLY CRAP DUDE. This ROCKED. Fantastic job, man, you did great! That's hard to do without being cliche and you did it, and it was beautiful! Love this!