Alphabet

Await

Beautiful moments

Coming along your way

Defeating bad things across.

Eventually settling down and

forgetting about the lost, feeling

good vibes and controlled emotions.

Healing everything that once filled life black.

Innocent souls suffering from the lack of appreciation.

Joy and happiness softly start to reach your empty veins.

Keen on living, finding their way through a maze of lost thoughts.

Life they seek, and find in the deepest of your soul, eager to come out.

Masks of pure hope hiding in the ceiling of your body, softly leaving their cage.

Not a chance to fail, nor a chance to stay, every single one stimulating the other one.

.

Once they are out, your lips turn slightly softer, the smile on your face brighter.

Pursuing the dreams you’ve always had, but never dared to make real.

Questioning your choices, relying on the purest form of

reality inside your body, the heart which makes us

see things we don’t want to, but have to in order

to accept what we need and want in life.

Utopia keeping in mind, however

vivid thoughts in your mind

Will wait for the right

Xanthic sun.

You will

zone in.

Author's Note

Note: english isn't my mother tongue

Reviews

[KL]

Your English is flawless here, not to mention the poem couldn't have been written in any other way! You've really outdone yourself here... and I really like the feeling of positivity this gives you the entire way through. Anything good can come out of the bad, anything can be made into art. You ARE talking about poets and poetry itself, aren't you? You're talking about 'zoning in' to something that inspires you and writing about it with 'controlled emotion.' Not necessarily your intention, but it makes sense with the theme of the Alphabet and its letters, as well as 'relying on the purest form of reality inside your body.' Thanks for sharing!

[Void Unspoken]

I really am impressed by this! great job! i cant wait to read more from you!!!! keep up the good work!

[Angie Diane♥&hea..]

This was very good. I like it a lot. It is deep as well. Good job. Thanks for sharing. :)

[Robyn]

a unique and organized poem
nice work

[r]

This is AMAZING. Nothing much more to say that this is AWESOME and I love it. :)

[Coyote Poetry]

This is amazing. I couldn't do this and make sense. You did. You create a outstanding poem. A outstanding poem. You are a skill writer.
Coyote

[Senseless whatever]

Outstanding. I have read a few of these and must be honest, rarely do they flow as well as this. The steady flow of thought make this an almost seamless read. Positive message here fills the soul like a billowing sail, the very shape of the great piece.

[FlawedByDesign]

This is a very interesting and unique write, as I have not seen any poem such as this one, where it uses the alphabet as an acrostic.
It's written well and manages to tell a story. there is no disconnect until the very end in my opinion. The lines,
"Utopia keeping in mind, however
vivid thoughts in your mind" - don't make much sense and the "You will zone in" was also a little disconnected.

Great effort.

[Matt G]

I'm not very good at this style, but I thought that this was very good! Great job on another Poem! =)

[NoneOfYourBusiness akaK..]

exceptional ~ creative fluid movement down the page~ well done with the form!~

[Atheana Kylee-S. C.]

Awesum :)