World War Me

World War Me

A Poem by Kasaundra
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This is a poem about an abusive relationship and how it can be compared to a war.

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I ran from the enemy,

a.k.a my ex-boyfriend.

 

Our relationship was like walking through a battlefield.

I’m without armor and one wrong move you’re down.

 

His voice was like bullets piercing though my flesh.

Eventually, I was shot down by his bullets, and by his fists.

I hit the ground and was left to suffer as bullets after bullet come.

 

Now the war is over, I waved my little white flag.

I said enough was enough and I tried to stand.

 

Sometimes still, I suffer and fighting in the war

even after he is gone and I’m home-free.

 

Now shellshock holds onto me, grasping at my bones.

But, I try to pull at and loosen its death grip.

and for there to never be another World War Me.

© 2014 Kasaundra


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I love the symbolism and The structure is sound. the struggle of inner turmoil is also relevant in this piece as well. This is well written. The rhythm is lacking a bit, but it doesn't take from the wording. its wonderfully expressive.

Posted 10 Years Ago


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Kasaundra
Kasaundra

Marshfield, MA



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My name is Kasaundra but I go by Kassi. I'm very passionate about English and have been writing since I can remember.I write both poetry, fiction novels, and s.. more..

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