A Heartbeat-beat-beat

It is about how intimidating a blank page is and how difficult it is to sometimes get your words down on paper.

A blank page

and the way it lay

intimidates me so.

 

It’s as though it’s waiting to be filled,

filled with verses bursting with emotions

that escape from inside my mind.

 

The way it stares back,

without having any eyes,

it still gawks into my soul.

 

The words will be the pages heartbeat,

a beat, beat, beat.

like the tempo of a drum.

 

But, like the tick of a clock

time fades away

and the page still lay blank.

Author's Note

What do you think I could work on in this?

Reviews

[Cid]

Review :
No, I don't think, You should write some more on it because It's perfect, short and well suited as a poem but, apart from the poem, if you want then you can write some more on it as a story, novel or so on but as a poem, I think, It's cool! Life's really filled with great ideas, opportunities, lives, beauties and so on but it's still seemed as same as a "Blank-Paper" and heart beats for what we even don't know myself but we move where the day, the life, the heart, the mind takes us to.

Rating : 5 stars!
Note : "It's a very conceptual theme and I loved this beautiful and "Heartbeat" poem."