Soft Thoughts

Soft Thoughts

A Poem by Kitten
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A young lady cannot sleep, for thoughts of the one she loves floats through her mind all night.

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It's a late hour in the cool night,
I gaze at my dark ceiling, tired,
but I can not sleep,
because of you.
I don't want my thoughts of you to be gone,
how I wish you would visit me in my dreams,
then I would come to sleep sweetly...
Closing my eyes,
I'm in a secret place,
alone in your embrace,
the silence only broken by the steady tick-tock of the clock,
I imagine it as your heartbeat if you were laying here next to me.
There wouldn't be any exchange in words,
for love needs no language to express itself,
our hearts understand each other,
I look into your eyes for they speak the world to me,
your soft touch caring, 
I'm safe in your arms as your tender warmth consumes me
as we fall into a deep sleep,
Oh! How I wish this moment never ends!
Alas, I open my eyes back to the dark night,
where I lay alone,
and my thoughts are with hope,
though you and I are apart,
we share the same dream..

© 2013 Kitten


Author's Note

Kitten
I really couldn't sleep last night and I wrote this describing myself exactly how I felt in the moment. Yes, it is my first go at a love poem so please share you thoughts and criticism! enjoy:)

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A very good first poem of love. Good to allow the people we care for in our thoughts and our dreams. Make the time we spend together with them more precious. Good when dreams and wishes can come true.. Thank you for sharing the beautiful poem of love.
Coyote

Posted 11 Years Ago


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Wow. this is the perfect dream. I know this dream very well. Great poem.

Posted 11 Years Ago


Beautiful work:) I loved it:)

Posted 11 Years Ago


The shape of this poem looks like a flying bird or an aeroplane.
It's message is also clear like crystal.
You and your loved one sleep under different roofs,but share the same dream.
This thought is very unique.
Thank you Lydia for crafting a wonderful poem.

Posted 11 Years Ago


This's a very nice and a lovely poem of love. Am sorry to hear you couldn't sleep last night .. lol
but hey, may i ask, are you in love dear friend :P ???

Posted 11 Years Ago


Kitten

11 Years Ago

haha of course not! :D
Neon

11 Years Ago

You made me smiley now ..thanks frnd...
and by the way .. My best wishes're with you always an.. read more
Kitten

11 Years Ago

hahaha you make me smile Neon :D and thank you :3
Separation, eh? It's an interesting concept, and you described the illusion well.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Kitten

11 Years Ago

Thank you Mister Trujillo :)
V. P. Trujillo

11 Years Ago

Of course, Ma'am. =]
I usually don't like poems like this (they're so IRRITATING) but I found this to be quite an enjoyable read :)

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Kitten

11 Years Ago

thank you thank you "Kevin" :*
Kevin

11 Years Ago

XD you're very welcome "Kitten"

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Added on November 11, 2013
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Kitten

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