SINONG TUNAY NA BAYANI?

Sinong tunay na bayani?
Iyon bang taong nagbuwis ng buhay para sa bayan?
O iyong taong nangibang- bayan?

Sino bang tunay na nahihirapan?
Ang ama o ina na umalis para sa pamilya,
O ‘yung naiwan para umasa?

Bayani nga bang maituturing ang mga kababayan nating na naghahanap ng karuwagan sa buhay,
Kaysa sa mga naiwan na umaaasa sa uhay?
Mga taong umaaasa at nagdudukal ng lupa 
O sa mga taong nagpapaalipin ng kusa?

Alin ba ang mas mahirap? 
Ang magpaalipin sa ibang lupa
O a sarili mong bansa?

Reviews

[Pinoy Ako]

Hi Vanessa . Your piece was referred to us by someone. I do like the lesson behind your words and lines. I wonder if you would like to share and post your piece to our little home or little hiding place established by Belle " Pinoy Ako " .. So a lot of Filipino member there could read and give you their take. We do have a very talented writers in our group. I would wait for your reply and permission. And it was nice knowing you by the way.

[vanessa cabrera]

hi sir/mam, first, thank you for reading my poem,and the one who referred it to you. and also thank you for the invitation, yes i love to be a part of your so called "little hiding place". if i can finish my new poem i will submit it just tell me how. .thanks for dropping by. .God bless!