Slenderize

She deserved it

a slug on the sidewalk will fry in the summer sun

every rose will eventually wilt and die

no one likes spoiled milk

Reviews

[Britteny]

I feel your poem is more about aging than it is about slenderizing...unless per chance are you using the word slenderize as a code for conformity to look young? If so then you hit the nail on the head here....normally I dislike this type of poem but this was nicely done and made me think/ grabbed my attention in such few words! Talented keep writing!