A Laugh and a Giggle

 

A Laugh and a Giggle

 

A laugh and a giggle

   is all it takes

To put

    that gorgeous smile

on your face

I love you more

than life itself

You make me feel

    like I’m going

 to melt.

Even one

   little

 amazing

  kiss

I would not

want to miss

You hold me

so close

You’re the one

I love

the most.

I love it when

          you make me laugh

It’s not that hard;

you do the math

A laugh

and a giggle

is all it takes

To put that smile

right on your face

 

 

Reviews

That was a nice, sweet poem. Some of the lines didn't seem to fit exactly into the rhythm of the whole thing, making it seem a little awkward at times, but it was good aside from that. Keep writing.

[Butterflymom]

This is sweet, heartfelt, and joyful! Very nice flow, and fun to read!

[Jenthura]

Lovely poem, I like the line there about a laugh and giggle. One piece of critique, you could make the font smaller; easier to read.
Keep writing!

[Jessica]

I like this poem. It's cute, quirky, and romantic. Excellent job. :D

[LisetteCanWrite!]

Wow profound feelings of love and passion.. simple words in writing.. but very intense emotions! Adoring a smile and sense of humour in another.. that is really big to me as well. Not always needing words in life.. love is found in actions..and body language loved the lines:

I love you more than life itself You make me feel like I'm going to melt

This is highly inspirational.. passionate.. full of love! =)