sunrise my love

i could hear the train arriving

its almost sun rise

every sunday morrning

i walk toward the old train tracks to watch the sun rise

its a perfect view from were i stand.

i felt a chill run down my back

my boyfriend rapted a wool blanked around me

this is his first time waching sun rise with me

suddnely light pink filled the horizen

than a littel bight of blue was at the top of the pink.

it was now 6:30am

the sky was amazing with the pink color

 i never saw a more butiful sunrise in my life

when i saw my firt sun set i could not take my eyes off of it

i turened to look at my boyffriend's expression

he was gone

i felt fear were was he

i felt a tap on my soulder.

i turen all the way around

there he was on his knee with a diomond ring in a case held turds me

"(name i wont tell u) Will You Marry Me?"

he asked the most important question.

Author's Note

yes i know theres incorrect spelling and all. i just want to know the idiea of it is it good or bed. and this is fake it never happened.

Reviews

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Aww this is really good. It painted a very clear and vivid picture in my head.