You Monster

Leave.

Leave and stop coming back

Memories count to ya know

Its to painful

Why do you like torturing me?

It hurts 

Why don't you feel the same pain I do?

 agonizing

 unbearable

Please make it stop

Please

My chest hurts from crying

I can barely breathe

This happens every night

I have to fake my smiles ya know

Its horrible

This is not how someone should live

You did this to me

You made me into this...thing

And I will never forgive you

Reviews

[I Shred This Cabbage]

This is so real and alive with feeling. The thing I most admire in poetry is the essence of the person being tangible in the lines. I can feel that in these lines. Well done :)

[Cody]

Man, this put me on the throne of guilt like I was the monster. I love this in a hateful and disturbed way. Great job.

[Jake Donald Stephens]

I've known some monsters in my time. They come in all shapes and sizes. And they can become demons who haunt us... Sometimes forever. Thanks for sharing your powerful work.

[ChaosBeast]

Very powerful. You really made me feel something. Good poem.