day 17 - brussels

day 17 - brussels

A Poem by valerie
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"god's moving in your bloodstream where the crossbeats aren't so slow." --broken horse by freelance whales. if you were time, what would you see?

"
blood moving steady,
honey,
blink rhythm'd with a pulse
you're moving
forward
red light, green light
this feels like slow motion
but it isn't
you're just not running fast enough.

© 2011 valerie


Author's Note

valerie
constructive crit, please.

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Added on April 20, 2011
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valerie
valerie

suburban chicago, IL



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A Poem by valerie