day 04 - orlando

day 04 - orlando

A Poem by valerie
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kennedy space center

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she lay next to him with silver starlight
streaming in. he was so far away,
she looked at the moon to feel his heartbeat;
fingers against the glass to feel
his twinkling-star pulse.

© 2011 valerie


Author's Note

valerie
thinking of cutting the last two lines, opinions?
constructive crit please!

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valerie
valerie

suburban chicago, IL



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