Toutes les Impasses

Toutes les Impasses

A Poem by Val Val

February 7, 2010 / 1:55 am

Yes. I will
Be a leaf in
The breeze.
Hopefully,
A healing
Wind flows
After me.

© 2010 Val Val


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Yes, I am but a leaf that floats along the river life...

Short and sweet, very nice poetess.

Love your song list.
Antonio


Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

leaves of Val...

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Simple yet elegant. Breaking up the lines into such short bursts gives extra weight to each word.

Posted 14 Years Ago
Beautiful, hopeful, definite :-)

Posted 14 Years Ago
small,lovely,inshallah a healing breeze will flow after you,,,

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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