Sound Reduction

Belted this one out in exactly 7 minutes. I think it shows.

Ambient Noise
November 20, 2009 / 11:23 pm

My tolerance for the
Bullshit is low these
Days, find myself in
Ways I thought impossible.
Unstable cable. Pray tell
Where I might find a
Wishing well. Honesty
Eludes me, I am a
Study of probability.
Thoughts come to pull
Me under, wonder when
The thunder started. I
Entered halfhearted then
Parted the sea. Could it
Be that the me that is
Me is she? The conundrum
Is that I've succumbed to
Being numb and lava couldn't
Melt these walls, I am
Beyond calls, first-of-alls,
And squalls. Drawls remind me
That I am so I I I and not
Near enough you you you.
Pull down the blinds, lover.
I need not see the ground cover.
No matter where we are
Rain washes away the tar.

Author's Note

Whatever.

Reviews

[Legion]

There are those letters again (I U). We are so involved with ourselves as a society that we fail to see the horizon beyond our own footprint. Like the randomness of this.

[Amanda Jane]

I really like the internal rhyme.