Have You Ever Had a Bad Time In Levi's?

Have You Ever Had a Bad Time In Levi's?

A Poem by Val Val

October 25, 2009 / 1:54 pm

It is in your hands.
Mine are clean.

Is it on your mind?
It's in my head.

It is up to you.
I only dream.

Is it on the fritz?
I read the script.

It is what it is.
Have we reached
An Impasse?

© 2009 Val Val


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I really like the title (can I steal it?). I think you might go further with that title. Explore the idea some more.
Come back with a new poem.

Yours,
Billy the Kid

Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

This is cute really!
Enjoyable read here ^_^

Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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