Going Soft

Never going to be out of words.

All I Will Ever Ask
June 11, 2009 / 11:47 pm

                

                 
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A smile says seven
O'clock or outer space
Is inevitable. I'm
Knotting up knits
Better kept insipid.
If I never navigate
Away again I'll intertwine
Mine with wild pine and
End up freezing, frozen
Among the other dozen
Or so significant rants.
Grant-grown green grapes
Live longer lives. Luckily
You yearn/learn your lesson.
June gloom is a motel room
Ready for whatever endeavor
Whomever you deem clever
Enough to lever forever. I'm
Tired. Tried to tangle the
Lines, instead organized.
Damn the preliminary exam,
I'm ready for strawberry jam
On toast, not pot roast and
I suppose this flows from nose
To toes not rose to prose. Those
Poems lack stems, heavy heads,
Happy being limp dicks. Sticks to
The roof of the mouth like peanut
Butter, impossible to swallow,
Even harder to follow. Stutter
Through the gutter, rise with the
Demise of surprise. I'm not unwise.
I sensationalize.

Reviews

[BjH]

However do you start what is meant to be a good review with the clich�d exclamations such as WOW or JESUS!?

I read this, like it, but for some reason, maybe a house fire, I didn't review there and then. But then I listened to it once you have attached the audio and was given a whole different dimension. It's like seeing a picture move. It become more real in someone else's voice for me.

I have listened to it several times and it doesn't get old. It grows, I think you should do more audios on the caf�.

The rhyme is kinetic at times.

K I N E T I C

[Mark]

Fits you like a pair of old jeans

[Zane Kunning]

I subconsciously hear a rythm in the background, as if you're some mad beat poet. You have definitely caught my attention with this unique anachronistic style. Kudos!

[Hedra Helix]

A smile says seven
O'clock or outer space
Is inevitable.

I was going to say I like this part best but after your rhymey sesh you give it at the end, yep, self actualized payment in full and I dig man, I dig that you make us work for the wink. Bad a*s.