WTM

is nothing...

MFRS
December 18, 2008 / 1:00 am

Between the sigh,
The battle cry, and
The money supply we
Are living. And giving in
To whatever temptation
Throws our way. Acclimation
Is bound to happen some
Time. And this is just the
Beginning rhyme. Find me
A clock to wind and I'll
Be six hours ahead of my
Fellow unwed, white bread,
Living dead. Val doesn't live
Here anymore, found the door,
Asked for more, not sorry for
Tripping over your feelings.
God, I find that unappealing.
When did I become the keeper
Of all things grim reaper? Really
Look at my face, you'll see a
Base of just-in-case, a dot of
Mental case, and flat out coup
De grace. Smile, there is no
Back-up file, just versatile
Writing style. I'll spin this one
Ten times more, before you
Catch the overall price of your
Time. Crime I can't play the guitar
I'd be a motherfuckin rock star.

 

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Reviews

[yashsickle]

Love the flow and the structure. When I read the words I see ball room dancers going back and forth. Love the last line lol.

[John Morris]

'smile there is no back up file' can i use it? I really, really, really like that line.

Not so well written but it does not matter the phrases in here and great and make up for not so good layout.

An amazing piece.

[Paul Grimsley]

yes. very