The Girl Voted Most Likely To Have Her Heart Ripped Out By A Complete Stranger and To Read The Entire Encylopedia Britannica

The Girl Voted Most Likely To Have Her Heart Ripped Out By A Complete Stranger and To Read The Entire Encylopedia Britannica

A Poem by Val Val
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December 13, 2006 / 9:08 pm

Heart in my hands.
Cool eyes, looking through
Your guards like a
Model on the catwalk.
(Nothing but the future
Ahead, one step at a
Time, baby.) I run
Hot, a suped-up
Mustang ready for
That long, hard ride
That makes me drop
The clutch. I read your
Words like Rabbi's read
Ancient Hebrew texts,
Eyes flow with a silver caress.
Head bowed, whispers of
Appreciation. Always on
The look out for more
Gospel, darlin. Drop those
Gems to me. Liquid life.
I love you like sunlight
Through dust. See it,
Feel it. Definitions say
This is lust. Let's make
Our own dictionary.

© 2008 Val Val


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"Eyes flow with a silver caress"
"I love you like sunlight through dust"

Those two lines plus the title make this worth reading all by themselves
Nice job

Namaste'
Tim

Posted 16 Years Ago


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