MUSE

MUSE

A Poem by The Valerian Legion
"

My muse is guiding me I think.

"

 

MUSE

 

by Lady Valmar

 

 

In dreams I see naught

But a glance of past dalliances

 

I will not dwell on my failures

But seek the lessons I’ve learned

 

In this bitter light that is sometimes life

The steady gait of swift feet guides me forward

 

My creative streak

 

 The Muse.

 

Biding streets I’ve yet to walk

And boundaries I’ve yet to unlock

 

 

 

© 2008 The Valerian Legion


Author's Note

The Valerian Legion
Written May 31, 2006. Updated.

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your first two lines and your last 2 lines are my favorite, they come together clean and unambiguously. had a problem with ambigious language in the middle lines though. try putting your thoughts in a little more concrete detail so the reader can really chew on them.

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