More than Meets the Eye

Its rhyme has a lot of truth and its inquisitive with how words from each line can add new meaning when added together separate from that line.

Stumbling in the dark

Down by the park

When the seabirds call

That fall 

Dreaming somewhere hard

Take a dip in the lard

Where hell is bent

And Heaven sent

Galactic interlopes surface

To this the purpose

How to tonight the view

Will take the cue

Universe surrounds rough

Ply it to the cuff

Why did you lie

Dictate and be sly

Lightly over in past

So sails don’t last

Who said your innocent

Isn’t it true some meant

Tenderly all at once 

Yea wear it dunce

What made you king

Clown please sing

Planet orbits the sun

There isn’t fun

Because you made ore

Now you suffer more 

Monster come at me fool

I’m stronger you tool

Is it not right 

God wills might

Author's Note

Each beginning word and each last word can form new lines to create more meaning. Also notice each new paragraph alternates between a place and an action or definition. Each first word and last word of each line creates a new meaning as well. There is a lot more keys in this. Keep searching enjoy. This was pulled from a part of my tired brain. Perhaps you might like this subscribers.

Reviews

[frivolous treasures]

Hmmm, pretty intriguing I must say. This certainly added a new perspective... Very well penned :)

[The Valerian Legion]

Thank you. It was certainly unusual. I always say the good poetry writes itself...I don't write it. I'm just the messenger putting the words down.