My Pleasure

This is still in the works. It was a quick type out of a thought, and once the inspiration comes I intend to improve upon it, so I'm open to suggestions.

 

 

One deep breath

And your pheromones fill my lungs

My eyes look up past the hairs on your belly

To the face of the man I’ve chosen

To give all my passion to

I love your knowing smile

Pupils dilate, pulse rate quickens

Lips open like red lilies

Wet with anticipation

To accept you within them

And close my kiss around

Your pleasure

Which is my delectation

A goddess in her submission

I am yours, without regard

To anything outside our skin

Outside this rhythm

This absolute intimacy

Which I love to give you

Let me taste the honey suckle

Like none other, it makes me throb

Even when you are far away

And I have only my thoughts

So take my silent gift

As a place of comfort at the end of your day

Close your eyes

Twist your fingers in my hair

Tend to the flowers

Nourish my great longing

 

 

 

 

 

 

Reviews

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Intoxicating with the energy of lust and rapture. A wonderfully woven tale of submissive love given freely to the man above.

Steamy yet soft and with a alusion to something more heated moments next.

Great Creation!

Ash

[Robert Luna]

Sensual and very capturing. The way you drew each reader in with the desire to see what may unfold there in front of them. Feeling as we are seeing something that we should not but can not nor would not turn our eyes away just to witness the passion bloom and give way to it ow desires. Refreshing to the knowledgeable heart seeing the spirit and soul combine to embody the power and possibilities of uncertain.


Great Job!!!!!!!

[John Stussy]

Softly erotic and filled with the tender passion of love! Good job on this poem, I'd have to say it's a favorite.

[George Love]

Rather erotic, well written and sensual

[darkgurl]

WOW! Very well written, such an inticing write.