The Voices

He was sitting on his bed, tossing the pill bottle in the air. 'Just take it...' The voices shouted, 'Take them all!' He opened the bottle... 'Everyone will thank you. You'll be doing everyone a service...' They told him... "No," he yelled back. "No. What if it doesn't work?! I can't live like that!" The demons laughed. 'How can you live like this?!' Out of anger and frustration, he threw the pill bottle across the room. "Just get out of my head! What does it take for you to just leave me alone?!" As the demons laughed and shouted worthless insults, he walked over to the closet and pulled out the loaded gun. The demons in his head sneered... 'That's all we want...' They said. "Just get out of my head..." He pleaded. He pointed the gun at his temple. "I want to be free..." He pulled back the trigger... 

His mind became the quietest it's ever been

Reviews

[Julie McCarthy (juliesp..]

wow wow wow
this describes someone haunted by the voices he hears daily every minute of his tortured life
a good description and ending "his mind became the quietest its ever been"thanks for this amazing work and entry into my comp what happens we die
good luck

[keith]

His mind became the quietest it's ever been

wow ... strong statement