Its better to be like Water .

As the water I would like to be
as gentle as nobody could see
gentle to every one
and molding as one could pour into
but as the water can bring disasters
and could break the hardest of the hard rock
it is the worst that one could see
but still like water I would like to be.
-by vaishnavi

Reviews

[Parimal Pratyush]

Very very observant of you to write a deep poem such as this. WOw.

[Bluefire]

Powerful yet peaceful, water can also prolong life and without it bring death.
Interesting peace and perspective.
Well done. ^^

[raj24]

i remember Bruce Lee saying, " Be like Water"...that is flexible enough to take any shape...u can b hard n gentle at the same time...you are right u r intelligent...water as a source gives life but at the same time it bring disasters...nicely written..:)

Raj

[vaishnavi]

very correct ant that is what i have mentioned here....
thn 4 that

[Cory Barrett]

water deceiving gentle power

[vaishnavi]

. ^_^

[Happy hours]

nicely expressed feeling with water as a parameter...very good write :)

[vaishnavi]

thanks... :)

[Eve Ola]

'this one is really beautiful. i like the way you express both sides n ended up by saying I would like to be water

[vaishnavi]

i have mentioned both views and counter views as the coin has always 2 sides....
thanks for liking :)

[Emily]

I love the wording! Keep it up!

[vaishnavi]

thanks, i will....

[anne]

bringing both the factors at the same time is nice.........

[vaishnavi]

of course it is ....