smile

there are different kinds of people on earth
they have their own kind of smile
some smile for the sake of smile
and  some smile with their heart

the word smile is so small
but when you react walking through its definitions
it shows a lot
it shows the feeling of joy
or a feeling of love towards others
but there are some smiles
that are cruel
but the true smile comes on your face when you meet with someone close to your heart
but now the real meaning of smile has changed
even if you smile with a fake smile on the face
no one can read the pain behind it
cuz it is said world is so lost in it
that it cant read the pain of others

Reviews

[Mirra]

Simple but wonderful message :-) Amazing piece.

[vaishnavi]

thank u :)

[Eve Ola]

another wonderful piece .I really enjoyed the last verses.overall its great

[vaishnavi]

glad u enjoyed this piece it is gr8 tat u liked it

[Emily]

I love the it! The way you worded it was just awesome! Great idea for a poem. Keep it up!

[vaishnavi]

thanks Emily :)

[Utkarsh Singh]

SMILE ...a word when you pronounce it makes you smile........very interesting poem vaish ,...........and i like the twist you made by connecting your poem with world .....nive work ......good job ..........

[vaishnavi]

thanks utkarsh

[Utkarsh Singh]

welcome dear .......:D

[Ranger Kessel]

smiling is contagious. nice write:)

[vaishnavi]

thanks for reading it :)
keep on smiling and be happy

[Vidya Bacchus]

A smile is so valuable to people sometimes.It can brighten up your entire day.Great pen Vaish :)

[vaishnavi]

yes it is right smiles can brighten up your entire day
thanks for such lovely words

[Vidya Bacchus]

You are welcome my sweet friend :)

[vaishnavi]

. ^_^

[Parimal Pratyush]

A smile is the simplest gift you can give to a person. It conveys so many messages. Great little poem Vaishnavi. :) Very simple and amazing :D.

[vaishnavi]

i think little words can sometimes say a lot of meaning so i write it in short
btw thanks for the review

[Saddam]

but now the real meaning of smile has changed
even if you smile with a fake smile on the face
no one can read the pain behind it.

You have just put both smiles on your canvas. That's the true prospect of your skill. Great one dear.

[vaishnavi]

thanks SSADD for these lovely words