My Eyes...

My eyes always reveal a story
but there is no one
who could sit by my side
look into my eyes
and read the story & feel the pain

my eyes always show a strange feeling
but there is no one
to describe me that feelings

sometimes my eyes are filled with tears
but there is no one to wipe them...

sometimes there is a fear in my eyes
but there is no one to remove it

my eyes always search for someone
but that time no one is there for me

when my soul will go far from my body
my eyes will close forever
like a book with lock
with lots of secret inside
but that time willingly
people will try to read them
but like the key is lost in the woods of sadness
 no one can
read this book again

Author's Note

these are the feelings from the beneath.....

Reviews

[Eve Ola]

very impressive i can relate too

[vaishnavi]

thank god that some one is like me which can relate it :)
thanks for reading :)

[Eve Ola]

ur welcome :)

[Saddam]

My eyes always reveal a story
but there is no one
who could sit by my side
look into my eyes
and read the story & feel the pain

A very deep and emotional piece dear. But its true when we search someone there's no one. Great one

[vaishnavi]

thanks glad u liked it
and to say about the words they have just came from depth of heart

[Ranger Kessel]

nice poem with emotion:) nice job

[vaishnavi]

thank you very much for appreciating this work :)

[Emily]

I love the story it tells, I've just been loving your poetry lately! Keep it up!

[vaishnavi]

thanks Emily for these lovely words
thanks for liking it :)

[bikergirl3636]

I like it, really gets down deep.

[vaishnavi]

i appreciate your review actually how much deep the eyes goes that much deep feelings are hidden :)
thanks for liking it

[Vidya Bacchus]

This is so filled with emotion Vaish.The eyes are the windows to the soul they say and I guess if people took the time to look they would see what we feel.Excellent pen :)

[vaishnavi]

thanks Vidya for reviewing this poem with such excellent words there is a saying if eyes are washed with tears then we can see the world with a clear vision...
thanks for liking it

[Vidya Bacchus]

You are welcome my friend :)

[Parimal Pratyush]

Great piece.. very emotional and deep.. :D

[vaishnavi]

thanks for reviewing :)

[Utkarsh Singh]

such a beautiful poem vaish .............espacially the laast 3 lines ...........

[vaishnavi]

thank you very for a lovely review

[Utkarsh Singh]

welcome dear ......:)