Why do I see the Dream ?

Why I see the dream,
i know that can't be fulfill

Why I see the dream,
i know about what it is can't be mine

Why I see the dream,
which has snatched away the peace of my mind

Why I see the dream,
which i knows hurts me a lot

Why I see the dream,
which can't let me think and can't let me take decision

Why I see the dream,
which cant let me sleep with peace at night

Why I see the dream,
which always make me fall in love with someone

Why I see the dream,
which can't let me dream...

Reviews

[bikergirl3636]

i love this one too you have been doing a lot of good work

[vaishnavi]

thank you i do really appreciate your reviews
they motivate and inspires me :)

[Bluefire]

"Why I see the dream,
which can't let me dream..."
~*~
Very interesting. The title is a real eye catcher and the emotion is very real.
Well done. ^^

[vaishnavi]

thank you very much bluefire for such a lovely review

[Bluefire]

You're welcome. ^^

[sona]

Relatable poem ..Liked the poem

[vaishnavi]

thank you sona glad u liked it ^_^

[Eve Ola]

Why I see the dream? with super start n super ending. many can relate too!

[vaishnavi]

thank you eve for this lovely review :)

[Emily]

I love you wording! Good job!

[vaishnavi]

thank you very much Emily

[Vidya Bacchus]

A very nice poem Vaish.We have so many questions but don't get any answers sometimes :)

[vaishnavi]

yes it is true we don't find answers and when we go to find the reality is much painful than the dream

[Vidya Bacchus]

You are welcome my friend :)

[Ranger Kessel]

very nice poem. appreciate the read.

[vaishnavi]

thank you very much ranger