approaching footsteps...

Once it was a hot summer night
my father was feeling very hot and sweaty
he decided to sleep in my room
as it was the coldest one
i was sleeping with my mummy
next day dad ask me,
'' how could you manage to sleep in that room?''
i was puzzled at his such question
i asked him,''what do you mean?''
i was shocked at his such answer
he said,''at night in this room,
i hear lot of different voices
such as single knock on the door
and many other voices''
i thought that he is just lying
but the next day when i was alone at home
it was about 3'o clock
at the afternoon
i was lying on the bed with eyes closed
and suddenly i heard some
footsteps approaching towards me
i thought that mum and dad has came back
but i remembered that i have locked the door
from inside
the footsteps began to come closer
i thought it is just because i am feeling asleep
and what dad has told me yesterday is ringing in my head
i closed my eyes again
but suddenly a hand patted on my head gently
but there was no one in the room except me
 that patting was so gentle that i felt asleep
but  i was not completely asleep
that unknown spirit kissed on my cheeks
and then i heard footsteps going back
it just not happened once
but many times
i call it my guardian spirit
once i was not feeling well
i heard a sound '' get well soon dear''
it was that mysterious footsteps
approaching towards me....

Author's Note

it is really true all i have written, everything is true
as i was posting it some incidents took place sometime lights would have gone or computer might restart or would get hanged as it that spirit doesn't want me to publish it ....

Reviews

[Moonie]

I really enjoyed the feel of the poem. Thank you for sharing. :))

[vaishnavi]

your welcome and glad u enjoyed it ^_^

[Anahat]

It felt like more of a story telling than a poem..a few grammatical mistakes...but something different...
write a story on it...would make an interesting one :)

[vaishnavi]

thank you :D

[Eve Ola]

i enjoyed the read. we pretend n thought that there is nothing like that but few exits beyond the thought !! Keep sharing

[vaishnavi]

thank you :)

[bikergirl3636]

I like it, but i think it should be in more story form than poem.

[vaishnavi]

actually my stories are not more famous than my poems so i moved all of them in trash ans started writing poems...
well thank you and glad u liked it :)

[Emily]

Wow, one of my favorites poems! Well done!

[vaishnavi]

thank you very much Emily :)

[Ranger Kessel]

very nice poem. i enjoyed the read.

[vaishnavi]

thank you very much ranger

[Vidya Bacchus]

Very interesting Vaish.I believe there are things that we don't understand.Just because we can't see them does not mean they do not exist.

[vaishnavi]

absolutely true there r some ppl who have experienced the same..

[Vidya Bacchus]

Life and its mysteries yes.

[vaishnavi]

it was once shown on zee news about the village kuldhars at rajasthan its a place where ghosts liveand no ppl can survive there

[Vidya Bacchus]

Okay I did not know that.I will tell my mom about it she will be very interested :)

[vaishnavi]

do your mom takes interest in the reality of ghosts ? well if it is so then my mom too..

[Vidya Bacchus]

I guess we all believe a little in the supernatural in my family lol

[vaishnavi]

lol , by the way i am writing a new story on the wall between myth and reality so when i will complete it i will send u a read request i hope your mom and you will like it

[Vidya Bacchus]

I will look forward to reading your story Vaish :)

[vaishnavi]

okay :)