repeated mistake

there are some people in the world
that think that other peoples are too like them
the mistakes they have done regarding things in life,
They think we will do the same mistakes too
but all people are not same
and they do not repeat the mistake
but in fact we do learn from their mistake
and learn not to repeat it again
it is just the way of thinking of people....
 

Reviews

[Saddam]

They think we will do the same mistakes too
but all people are not same.

You are right.
Different people, different views, different appreciation.

[Missiannelli]

We all have a different personailty & different views:) Loved it.

[vaishnavi]

thank you glad u liked it

[Moonie]

The idea behind the poem is really great. Although the the third and fourth line sound a bit clumsy.
How about "the mistakes they have done regarding things in life,
They think we will do the same mistakes too, "
But again, its your poem, so it depends emtirely on you how you present it. Otherwise, an absolutely amazing read. Thanks for such an insightful poem.

[vaishnavi]

ok i will make changes
your reviews are amazing that enlighten me thank you! ^_^

[Moonie]

You are welcome. :))

[Mirra]

People are really fond of judging others but the only reason they do that is insecurities. They speak ill of others which they think are a lot better than them just to make themselves feel good. However, that's part of nature I think. Nice poem!

[vaishnavi]

thank you very much for this lovely review

[Mirra]

You're welcome ^_^

[bikergirl3636]

Sounds like society! I love it but don't forget we judge our self too

[vaishnavi]

yes we do judge ourselves but i think that we like when we judge ourselves than others judge us maybe that is a part our thinking...

[Ranger Kessel]

nice expression. well put together. keep it up

[vaishnavi]

thank you so much !

[Vidya Bacchus]

People tend to judge each other a little harshly.They figure that if they handled a situation this way that another person will do the same.Good poem :)

[vaishnavi]

thank you it is with every one who has done 1 or other mistake

[Vidya Bacchus]

You are welcome and so true :)

[vaishnavi]

: )